Haiku. Do you?
They’re VERY good. A fun challenge re: haiku reading is to see if you can make even one word improvement. No chance with these two…
The winners? Tie:
Moon at crescent.
Cicadas lift hosannas
to God’s fingernail.
The moon’s a baby
bump tonight—swollen and proud
to be great with child.
Wonderful.
Thanks, Mick. I'm partial to those two myself.
They’re VERY good. A fun challenge re: haiku reading is to see if you can make even one word improvement. No chance with these two…
The winners? Tie:
Moon at crescent.
Cicadas lift hosannas
to God’s fingernail.
The moon’s a baby
bump tonight—swollen and proud
to be great with child.
Wonderful.
Thanks, Mick. I'm partial to those two myself.